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The journey begins
Topic Started: Jun 18 2009, 06:25 PM (359 Views)
Optimus Prime
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Transform and roll out.

Me and Koaleaf lay sleeping beside a small river, under a bridge. This has been our home ever since we ran away from my parents.

As a light breeze rolls over my eyes, tousling my long black hair, I notice a small, bluish Pokémon rummaging through my backpack. I jump up startled, knocking Koaleaf to the ground. Shocked, Koaleaf started to scamper around, soon ending up behind me. As my friend cowered behind me in it's temporary state of shock, I took a closer look to see what Pokémon it is.

Upon examination, I recognize it as an Artily.

"Hey little guy," I said as I knelt down "I haven't seen any of you before"

As I went in to pet him, Koaleaf jumped out from behind me, scaring the Artily.

As I watched the Artily run, I notice that it has all of my food in it's mouth!

"Hey!" I yell, but to no avail "Come on Koaleaf, let's run after him!"

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After a long run, the Artily finally stops and drops the food. As Koaleaf runs over to pick it up, I hear a strange voice..

"Hey, give Artily her food back!"

As I look onto the source of the voice, I am stunned by a look of beauty.
She had long black hair, a perfect figure, dazzling amber eyes, and the most perfect ivory skin imaginable.

"I said, give it back!" She said again, this time with much more force.

"I-I'm sorry, but there is a misunderstanding here. The Artily took that food from me. I need it back please."

"Whatever pal," She said, with more arrogance then I have ever heard. "A street rat like you could never afford this quality of food. Unless you stole it? Is that what you are, you little rat? A thief?"

"Uh..Ugh... Listen, I don't want trouble. I just don't want to starve. Please give me my food back, You'll never hear from me again."

"I don't think so. I have this Artilly to feed, and I won't let anyone stop me, much less a pathetic loser like you!"

"Wait, St-!"

"Artilly, attack!"
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Are you watching closely?

Artily jumped forward and growled menacingly (even though it was so small and cute... er, anyways...)

(5) :artily: 23/23 [knows rock smash]

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Transform and roll out.

"Eh..(I don't want to fight her...)"

"Koaleaf, be careful! Use scratch!"

EDIT:OoC: Oh thank god you gave her an attack move.. Didn't realize till now Artily didn't have attack moves at level 5... :-/
Edited by Optimus Prime, Jun 20 2009, 11:09 AM.
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Code Master

OOC: Did you want this to be your official rival, or something like a side rival who plays a more important role in an overall plot?

(5) :artily: 18/23 [knows rock smash]
(5) :koaleaf: 21/25

Artilly did a strong rock smash, but your koaleaf pawed at the poor creature with a mighty scratch.
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Optimus Prime
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Transform and roll out.

OoC: No, I still want this person to be my main rival.

"Scratch again, Koaleaf!"
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Are you watching closely?

"Artily, get them, we can't let thieves like those win!"

The Artily dashed forward, ready for another attack, but Koaleaf struck first with another scratch.

(5) :koaleaf: 16/25
(5) :artily: 13/23 [knows rock smash]
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Transform and roll out.

"I'm not a theif! Koaleaf, scratch again, you can do it!"
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(5) :koaleaf: 11/25
(5) :artily: 8/23 [knows rock smash]

Another round of repeats occurred. The girl coudln't really come up with any good commentary (that is my fault) and so she just growled a bit.
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Optimus Prime
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Transform and roll out.

"Hang in there Koaleaf, it's almost over! Scratch!"
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Lol repeat round.

(5) :koaleaf: 6/25
(5) :artily: 3/23 [knows rock smash]
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Transform and roll out.

Repeat. Again.
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You win! 100 exp for koaleaf, and 1000p for you! Good work! Your know free to move on to the next route, however if you'd like to say your final good byes here feel free to do so.
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Transform and roll out.

The girl clutches the fainted Artily in her arms, whispering something in her ears that could not be heard.

"Excuse me miss, can I have my food back now?"

And at those simple words, the girl started weeping. With tears pouring down her cheeks, she screams at me:

"Take it then! If that's all you care about, then fine!"

"I- I'm sorry? If there's something I said to offend you..." I stammered.

*sniff* "No... I should be the one apologizing..." And through her tears, she told me her story.

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Her name is Salvus, and she comes from a wealthy family. This family lived a secluded life in a large mansion, and a huge garden. It was forbidden for her to leave; the farthest she could go was the garden.
One day while playing in the garden, Salvus heard a faint scream coming from the trees. It was her Artily; her leg was caught in a bear trap.
Her father was anti-pokemon, and as such did all he could to stop Salvus from being exposed to the taint. Despite her fathers wishes (and without his knowledge), she kept the Artily in her room, nursing her back to health.
But when she turned 17, her father found Artily. He attempted to kill her, but Salvus took her and ran. She was on the road for 2 days, without food, water, or shelter. Until Artily found someone. Natt.

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As Salvus waited for Artily to be healed in the Pokémon center, Salvus told me something.

"I plan on becoming a Pokémon trainer, Natt."

"Really? Well that's good then." I replied with a hint of dissapointment. I was hoping she would stay here a while..

"Miss, your Pokémon's in perfect shape now!" Said the nurse.

"Well Natt, I'm leaving now. Thanks for your support, maybe I'll see you around?"

"Sorry, but I doubt it. This is mine and Koaleaf's home, I like it here.."

"Oh..." And with a look of sadness, she walked out into her adventure, alone and with no idea where to go.

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A few days later, I was thinking to myself as Koaleaf was playing in the river.

"Koaleaf!" I yelled, startling him and making him fall down, face first, in the water.
I laughed and went to pick him up. "My friend, we are going on an adventure."

And with that, we set off, in hopes of meeting Salvus again.
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